Does this sound Romantic ? it doesn't right?

So i did some writing this week while i was at the neighborhood park doing my normal routine(staring contests with clouds), and ended up with this.....Does it sound Romantic ? it doesn't right? cause the two people i've showed this too already(pre post) have been pointing in that direction .... when that wasn't the intention...

i ~ the most selfish of vowels.
asked me for myself, today.
red folds inebriated, shaking.
with the scent of cut grass.

i ~ the most beautiful of sights.
asked me for my visions, today.
asked for my dreams.
those in color.

i ~ the damnation and salvation
asked for a heart, today.
asked for a soul of that tree
in the garden

i ~ asked for u.
u the rock
on which I shall build
my home

a home for u
and i

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