Okay here goes my 1st official blog post ...i still got nothing ...but i gotta poem that i wrote... here's the 1st of many gruesome poems i wrote...
In the Dark
There are times when I'm inconsolable
when the world around me becomes too much
and my demons come out to feast on me again
There are times when I'm hopeless
when I'm too lost to return home
and I don't need your comforting touch
I just need to be left alone to sit quietly in the dark
Don't offer me a friendly hand
nor a tender embrace of love
Just let me surround myself with shadows
and let my troubles eat me whole
Don't try to save me when I can't be saved
and keep your tender words for another day
a day when the tides of my heart have changed
and my soul flows the other way
But until that time remember that I love you
and that you're still the keeper of my heart
but for the moment love is not my friend
and your tender touch and sweetest smile
are like poison to my aching soul
So let me be
Let me sit alone in the dark
Let me find comfort in forgotten lusts
Let me bandage my heart with solitude
and dry my tears with time
I know that you understand
and I pray that you'll return
Because I long for when I can emerge from these shadows
and once again cherish the smile glistening
across your sweet, tender face
when the world around me becomes too much
and my demons come out to feast on me again
There are times when I'm hopeless
when I'm too lost to return home
and I don't need your comforting touch
I just need to be left alone to sit quietly in the dark
Don't offer me a friendly hand
nor a tender embrace of love
Just let me surround myself with shadows
and let my troubles eat me whole
Don't try to save me when I can't be saved
and keep your tender words for another day
a day when the tides of my heart have changed
and my soul flows the other way
But until that time remember that I love you
and that you're still the keeper of my heart
but for the moment love is not my friend
and your tender touch and sweetest smile
are like poison to my aching soul
So let me be
Let me sit alone in the dark
Let me find comfort in forgotten lusts
Let me bandage my heart with solitude
and dry my tears with time
I know that you understand
and I pray that you'll return
Because I long for when I can emerge from these shadows
and once again cherish the smile glistening
across your sweet, tender face
8 Thoughts:
wow..u wrote that on your own lanka ??? I'm officially impressed
wow ur really good. i cant wait to read more....thats just wow!
That is an amazing poem, I love it. I know that feeling all too well.
Well about the Poem its so cooool man you can turn deep feelings in to beautiful words very well I feel that you have expressed the feelings of a totally depressed guy with a broken heart. You are awesome dude I didn’t know that you can write poems keep it up bro good luck*****
wow i must say that i really liked reading this never has someone said my own words to me in their own voice. i could feel the pain and sorrow seeping from your wounds. and i loved it. i could feel the tender kiss of darkness upon my skin, how i often, long for the embrace of the night her cold hand upon my back like a long lost freind. on the other side of it i could also feel the love you hold for whom ever you wrote this for and your longing for them, dipite your need for solice in solituted. thank you for the opertunity to read your work. it was most beautiful.
cory
awsome thingy...luved it
hahaha nice poems! shyt! great site too...seriously...get htem published hahahha or are these secrets? keep up da gud work :)
wow.. good good... am impressed... seriously u writtin such a thing is gud... nt da ur not capable of it.. =P
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